Yo! Daniel! I'd like to offer a couple of wording changes and a thought
about the samples I just finished listening to on your Body Music
Therapy site.
Your main claim would seem to be the one on the banner of your website:
"Body Music Therapy is a series of self healing music that uses energy
of music as a medium to harmonize organs, organ structures, and cells,
increasing natural healing power."
The language in this is ambiguous, and really senseless, where it refers
to "self healing music". This phrase means the music heals itself!
The phrase "harmonize organs", in the context of healing with music, is
very ambiguous. I'd suggest the following replacement:
"Body Music Therapy is a set of compositions which improves the
coordinated actions of human organs and cells, thereby increasing the
body's natural healing power."
I think this claim is preposterous, but at least it's grammatical.
In your FAQ, there's this:
"Q. What about side effects?
A. There can hardly be any negative side effects or harm caused by our
music. Just set listening level carefully, don't listen with high volume
level."
This isn't too bad, but I'd say this was better:
"Q. What about side effects?
A. There can hardly be any health effects caused by our
music. Just set listening level carefully; don't listen with high volume
level."
As to the samples I listened to, they're not bad! They seemed pretty
typical of "New Age" music, with slowly evolving diatonic harmonies. I
didn't identify many FM/PM/iPD timbres; I thought the sounds were mostly
samples, but I don't mind that. Ya gotta love "echo", doncha?
- synergeezer
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Re: [CZ-VZ-Files] OT My new electronic music project
2014-01-03 by <synergeezer@...>
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