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well, that was certainly merciless! personally I think the synth sounds
could be harder sounding- especially lead melodies, and there is not enough
harmonic movement- more chord changes, and dynamics needed.

As a guitarist, the guitar part sounded weakest to me.

J.
----- Original Message -----
From: "Steve Pering" <steve@...>
To: <logic-ot@yahoogroups.com>
Sent: 30 May 2002 11:52
Subject: Re: [L-OT] Feedback needed


> Oh dear Gerry... You did ask us to be merciless!!!
>
> Let me preface my critiscm by letting you know that I am sure my stuff
> suffers from the some of the same afflictions as yours. I will be posting
> tracks to MP3.com very soon (within the month) so you can get your own
back
> then.
>
> Well where do I start? OK one word to sum up first "boring"
> To be more precise... The track lacks light and shade, in fact it lacks
any
> definition at all. Every part of it is far too subtle, it sounds to me
like
> you lack confidence in your ideas and can't bring yourself to explore your
> musical ideas strongly enough. I could go on but I don't want to appear to
> be relishing this. As an artist myself I can appreciate the obvious work
you
> put into it.
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> I hope I haven't been too harsh.
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> Steve
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> On 29/5/02 9:37 am, "Gerrit "Gerry" Straub" <gerrit.straub@...> wrote:
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> > If you can find some time, please listen to
> > "Behind The Planets" and provide me with
> > your merciless criticism.
> >
> > www.mp3.com/Adream
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> > No need to slate the vocals, I know
> > they're bad, already taking singing
> > lessons right now, but wanted some
> > feedback in advance, couldn't wait...
> >
> > Thanks in advance
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> > Gerry
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