Thanks for the feedback! I got the same response from my friends regarding demo 1 and
the soundtrack feel. One of my friends was thinking about putting a guitar track to it. He
also talked about lyrics. I'm interested in how the dynamics would change.
I think I know what you're saying about the piano. When I tried taking some of it out, the
song seemed too light- like the synth stuff wasn't carrying enough weight on it's own. I
figured I'd go with it for now. I'm sure I could do better with transitions between parts too.
I think I suffer from Musical Attention Deficit Disorder. After 4-8 measures, the music's
got to do something different :p
My preference is more band-oriented. That's what I was going after with demo 1.
Thanks again!!
Mike
--- In xl7@yahoogroups.com, José Sáez <taliesin@t...> wrote:
> Demo 1 is pretty organic. It sounds like a TV soundtrack of some sort... Has a certain
"band" feeling... doesn't sound like coming from one piece of kit only. Criticisms: the
piano is too "in yer face" for me.
>
> Demo 2 sounds like early Depeche Mode. Again, i feel that the piano is too much all
over the place (perhaps the piano lesson had made you to not notice that :) ).
>
> Over all i like the structure of the songs. We are too used to 8 bar loops that evolve
forever, and these sound like you could sing over them.
>
> Jose
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: mike
> To: xl7@yahoogroups.com
> Sent: Wednesday, April 27, 2005 12:42 PM
> Subject: [xl7] A couple of new tunes...
>
>
>
> I put them in my yahoo briefcase if anyone's interested in listening. They're in the New
> Stuff folder within the Music folder. Here's the address:
>
> http://f1.pg.briefcase.yahoo.com/mikedancy
>
> I'm too lazy to give them names- just demo 1 and demo 2. They're both all emu (px7)
> recorded straight into my cd burner (going through mixer and eq first)
>
> I've been taking piano lessons for six months now. A few more years and maybe I'll be
> able to write using chords :p
>
> Mike
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