I think boring is very subjective. Something can be repetitive and meditati=
ve
without being "boring". IMO a repetitive track can be effective if all the =
elements are "in the pocket". With that said, I think the flaw in your trac=
k is the
bass-line it strikes me as a little stiff. With a down-tempo track it see=
ms
you'd want a sexy, laid-back slide to the bass-line. In particular, the thi=
rd note
sounds a bit off I'm not great with pitch (being a drummer), but to my ea=
r the
third note doesn't "sing", it's a little "flubby" are there two pitches t=
here? You
might also move the note a little behind the beat. The 4th, 5th and 6th not=
es;
also too stiff, might try swinging the quantize there or better yet, pitc=
h bend
the 5th note into the 6th. A friend once said (wisely), "if you establish a=
strong
bass (base?) you can build mountains..."
--- In elektron-users@yahoogroups.com, "Ronald Vonk (Roonan)" <info@r...>
wrote:
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> Again been busy with Downtempo.
> Not sure if it's good enough for next weeks Diesel U-Music contest.
> I always want to put in more and more, I've got the feeling this one is a=
> litlle boring,
> anyone................?
> http://home.planet.nl/~vonk0072/Demo/Roonan-Demo-2004-004.mp3
> ( it's another jam with the awesome trio Mnm, MD and ESX-1)
>
> Ronald.