Thanks!
D.
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Sent: Saturday, March 20, 2010 2:07 AM
Subject: Re: [emax] Imaginary Friend - my latest song
You have some nice tracks. My favourite is Prance! Jarre meets New Order meets Erasure meets
euro disco pop :)
/Tristan
On Sat, Mar 20th, 2010 at 7:00 AM, Daniel Baum <daniel@...> wrote:
> Thanks!
>
> I did some more editing to the vocals in Imaginary Friend today, so
> feel free listen if you like.
>
> As to my other work; there are another 13 recordings on my site that
> you are quite welcome to listen to. To get somewhat back on topic,
> one of them, called "Song of the Sampler" was entirely recorded on my
> Emax II.
>
> As for the future, I'm working on it. . .
>
> Regards,
>
> D.
>
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: Patrick R
> To: emax@yahoogroups.com
> Sent: Thursday, March 18, 2010 8:28 AM
> Subject: Re: [emax] Imaginary Friend - my latest song
>
>
>
> Hey Daniel,
>
> Yea, I was completely joking about the auto-tune shit. I hear a new
> song with that effect everytime I turn on the radio.
>
> I get what you are trying to do lyrically now and it makes sense.
> It is somewhat like Wrong in its repetition.
>
> Anyway I look forward to your next song/album!
>
> -patrick
>
> ________________________________
> From: Daniel Baum <daniel@...>
> To: emax@yahoogroups.com
> Sent: Thu, March 11, 2010 1:13:01 PM
> Subject: Re: [emax] Imaginary Friend - my latest song
>
>
> Hi Patrick,
>
> First of all, apologies for taking a long time to reply to your
> post. Also,
> thanks for taking the time to listen to my song and producing such
> a
> comprehensive list of suggestions.
>
> >First, major applause for completing something you feel happy
> enough with
> >to put out there. Second any >crtisims should be taken as trying
> to help.
> >And keep in mind I feel this is better than most the shit that is
> on >the
> >charts right now. But speaking of the charts, maybe you should add
> some
> >auto-tune effect on your >voice. I'm sure you would chart right
> now. . .
>
> Thanks! I'm pretty sure you were joking about this, but I went
> ahead and did
> it anyway. I used Reaper's own built-in autotune effect. It is not
> too
> dominant, and I think it does actually sound marginally better.
>
> I'd be very happy to hear what you think of the result:
>
> http://alonetone. com/danielb/ tracks/imaginary -friend
>
> >What are you going for with the track? What place, what atmosphere
> do you
> >want me to be in, or what >feeling do you have or want to envoke
> from the
> >song?
>
> I wanted it to sound kind of dark and forbidding. I probably
> shouldn't
> mention Depeche Mode yet again in connection with this song, but it
> will
> give you the general idea The actual inspiration for the basic
> sound came
> from an Emulator II demo I found on Youtube. That said, all of the
> sounds
> except the drums and the JX-8p pad that I used behind the
> repetition of the
> first verse are homemade.
>
> Just some thoughts:
>
> Structure:
>
> > The ending around >3:40-3:43 actually would sound really great at
> the end
> > of your bridge before droping >right back into the chorus.
>
> The flanging sound (actually Roland JX-8p oscillator sync, there's
> no
> flanger used), overlaid with the "filter sweep" DX7 sound, actually
> does
> recur in empty spaces throughout the track. At the place you
> mention, it's
> shortened.
>
> Lyrics:
>
> >It is my feeling that I'm being beat over the head with my
> "imginary
> >friend".
>
> That's kind of the point. People like the one the song describes
> can be
> rather obsessive and talk about their imaginary friends
> incessantly.
>
> >Effects:
>
> >The bass could use some glissandro or a slight susstain to round
> off the
> >edges just slightly.
>
> Interesting idea. Might not be too easy to achieve on an Emax II.
> Pitch
> envelope anyone?
>
> >Also, have you tried raising the bass an octave higher?
>
> I think it would sound rather plinky.
>
> >It sounds really low without the punch and this sometimes occurs
> on bass
> >samples that are being played too >low. Some EQ on the bass could
> make it
> >fill out a little also,
>
> It's not really a bass sample. it's a sample of me saying "taa"
> into my Korg
> Radias's vocoder. I did give it some extra EQ.
>
> >or layer a real bass sound in there.
>
> Don't have one, can't play it.
>
> >It made me think of Body Pop and a bit Joy Division so I think it
> is in
> >line with exactly what you were going >for. Keep it up!
>
> Thanks again for your criticism. I certainly didn't find it to be
> negative,
> and frqankly, even if it was, I normally find negative criticism to
> be more
> useful than everybody standing in the aisles and cheering. . .
>
> Regards,
>
> Daniel
>
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Re: [emax] Imaginary Friend - my latest song
2010-03-20 by Daniel Baum
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