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Please proofread this!

Please proofread this!

2001-01-08 by Paul Schreiber

Go to

www.synthtech.com/demo

get the PDF file named catalog_2.pdf

This is 1 of 2 brochure pages (not intended to replace the on-line catalog).
PLEASE
check for typos, screw-ups, stupid English, racial & gender bias, political
correctness, etc.

I'm printing 1000 of these things. Would hate to have a silly screw-up.

When I get back from NAMM, I'll mail everybody a copy.

Paul S.

Re: [motm] Please proofread this!

2001-01-08 by Thomas Hudson

Looks okay to me, but being an engineer (spelling issues)
and a southerner (speaking issues) you probably shouldn't
rely too heavily on my opinion. :-)

Tomy


Paul Schreiber wrote:
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> 
> Go to
> 
> www.synthtech.com/demo
> 
> get the PDF file named catalog_2.pdf
> 
> This is 1 of 2 brochure pages (not intended to replace the on-line catalog).
> PLEASE
> check for typos, screw-ups, stupid English, racial & gender bias, political
> correctness, etc.
> 
> I'm printing 1000 of these things. Would hate to have a silly screw-up.
> 
> When I get back from NAMM, I'll mail everybody a copy.
> 
> Paul S.

Re: [motm] Please proofread this!

2001-01-08 by imorpheusl@aol.com

minor errors:

-the MOTM410 description has a wording error (I think): When the same 
old.......the MOTM 410 makes your track stand out. I think it should be  "the 
MOTM 410 will make your track stand out" (this is just a wording thing...I 
think I'm right) 

-the dimensions on the motm 700 bullet list (bullet #7) is one space to the 
right of       the bullet, but none of the other model descriptions are like 
this

- I belive "useage" on the 800 description should be spelled usage (bullet #6)

- the motm 910's description has an error:  "1in" should be "1 in" (bullet #2)

-Chaz
[morpheus]

Re: Please proofread this!

2001-01-08 by doc pendergast

h3y,
i concur  with chaz, however, couple quick questions.
under the 410, should "vocal formants" be changed to "tunable to 
vocal formants"?  
under 820, 4th bullet, should that be "bypass: switch or remote"?  
using the colon symbol to denote either/or?
on the 910:  there are 16 plugs, so would it not be 1 in - 15 out,
dual 1 in - 7 out, dual 1 in - 3 out and 1 in - 7 out?  or did i miss 
somethin' in my math?
on the 940: should "passive modules" be singular?  so it's "passive 
module, requires no power"
peace,
doc

--- In motm@egroups.com, imorpheusl@a... wrote:
> minor errors:
> 
> -the MOTM410 description has a wording error (I think): When the 
same 
> old.......the MOTM 410 makes your track stand out. I think it 
should be  "the 
> MOTM 410 will make your track stand out" (this is just a wording 
thing...I 
> think I'm right) 
> 
> -the dimensions on the motm 700 bullet list (bullet #7) is one 
space to the 
> right of       the bullet, but none of the other model descriptions 
are like 
> this
> 
> - I belive "useage" on the 800 description should be spelled usage 
(bullet #6)
> 
> - the motm 910's description has an error:  "1in" should be "1 in" 
(bullet #2)
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> 
> -Chaz
> [morpheus]

Re: Please proofread this!

2001-01-08 by Dave Bradley

This is a technical nit, but I'd argue that the 440 and 420 have 
THREE FM inputs, not TWO - you can certainly FM with the 1V/OCT 
input, too!

Moe

--- In motm@egroups.com, "Paul Schreiber" <synth1@a...> wrote:
> Go to
> 
> www.synthtech.com/demo
> 
> get the PDF file named catalog_2.pdf
> 
> This is 1 of 2 brochure pages (not intended to replace the on-line 
catalog).
> PLEASE
> check for typos, screw-ups, stupid English, racial & gender bias, 
political
> correctness, etc.
> 
> I'm printing 1000 of these things. Would hate to have a silly screw-
up.
Show quoted textHide quoted text
> 
> When I get back from NAMM, I'll mail everybody a copy.
> 
> Paul S.

Re: [motm] Re: Please proofread this!

2001-01-08 by Paul Schreiber

Correct you are! The Moe the Merrier!

Paul S.
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Subject: [motm] Re: Please proofread this!


> This is a technical nit, but I'd argue that the 440 and 420 have 
> THREE FM inputs, not TWO - you can certainly FM with the 1V/OCT 
> input, too!
> 
> Moe
> 
> --- In motm@egroups.com, "Paul Schreiber" <synth1@a...> wrote:
> > Go to
> > 
> > www.synthtech.com/demo
> > 
> > get the PDF file named catalog_2.pdf
> > 
> > This is 1 of 2 brochure pages (not intended to replace the on-line 
> catalog).
> > PLEASE
> > check for typos, screw-ups, stupid English, racial & gender bias, 
> political
> > correctness, etc.
> > 
> > I'm printing 1000 of these things. Would hate to have a silly screw-
> up.
> > 
> > When I get back from NAMM, I'll mail everybody a copy.
> > 
> > Paul S.
> 
> 
> 
>

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